Monday, February 7, 2011

First scene list

1. INT. CINDYS HOUSE - NIGHT

Establish how parents are angry at their daughter -confiscate phone and grounded for this weekend, takes down friend number before gives her dad her phone.


2. INT. CINDYS HOUSE- NIGHT

Parents go to the opera ' not contactable for couple of hours' girl is home alone. First suspicious shot from outside watching into the house as car drives off. 'Handheld shot someone watching into the house'.


3a. INT. CINDYS HOUSE- NIGHT

Girl calls friend to get her friend her (from a landline 'friend makes comments about using a landline'). Suspicious hand held shots watching in on her as she walks around the house. Goes to make popcorn (either in a microwave or a sauce pan) goes to put a movie on, getting ready for when her friend arrives. Walks away (phone rings again) its her friend. (Phone rings again) it’s her friend. (Phone rings again) unknown caller. In this phone call- 'wants to speak to a Mrs. or Mr./ tells the caller neither are at home, puts phone down.


3b. INT. CINDYS HOUSE- NIGHT

Doors bell rings no ones there, standing lookingout phone call goes again shuts the door to answer the next call. Unknown caller again- gets a bit suspicious tells him how she has a friend coming over, he makes inappropriate remarks (slumber party). Walks around the house to make sure all the doors are locked. Phone rings again. This time the conversation is a 'guessing games' that each other are. Gets flirty but leads into a creep conversation (the unknown caller knowing what she looks like) as conversation goes on he tells her how he knows what she’s wearing- conversation gets deeper and he gets more aggressive to a peak where she puts the phone down. Doorbell now rings (contemplates whether to open it or not)


4a.INT. CINDYS HOUSE-NIGHT

Phone rings again 'are you seriously not going to let her in' .the teenage girl is very scared now- looks through the window, opens the door to her friend. Her girlfriend is standing in front of her crying which blood pouring out from her stomach. She falls to the ground screaming, until another friend pops out holding a phone and a speaker voice 'scared of a little ketchup'.


4b. INT. CINDYS HOUSE- NIGHT

Realizes her friends have made a practical joke on her, but then the phone rings again.

FADE OUT

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